Hi All,
I'm in the process of designing a postcard that I will send out to my prospects. I just got flat-out bored with the letter I had been sending, and decided to spice it up a little. Like I mentioned, this is just Draft #1, so any feedback you could give would be much appreciated!
Thanks,
Kyle
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Hey Kyle,
ReplyDeleteNice Blog!! About your postcard, I think its a great idea to do the postcard instead of a formal letter... some ideas to improve- think of a way to tie the front "Spring is near...got your gear?" into the back text, would be nice to have some flow. Also, for the text, maybe if you just did a 1-2 line intro and then did bullets and close with a line it would be easier to read and really just highlight the basics so your clients are more likely to at least see your c abilities, because let's face it, they probably are not going to read the whole postcard. But I think its a great start! good luck!
Whitney
LDP Associate
Mount Vernon Printing
Thanks for the feedback Whitney! I've received a lot of similar responses, so you can bet I'll be listening to you guys! Thanks again. -Kyle
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